For writers seeking early feedback on works in progress…

You provide: synopsis and an extract of up to150 pages
I provide: an outline critique (1-3 pages), based on two close readings.

Fee: £185.

For writers with a full manuscript…

You provide: full manuscript
I provide:

• General assessment of the whole script
• Comprehensive overview, including quality of writing, plot, characterisation and dialogue (where appropriate)
• Detailed analysis, chapter by chapter
• Creative editorial suggestions
• Marketability advice.

Fee: £1.75 per page

Second critique: 50% of original fee.

One of the most productive ways to help writers understand any problems with their work is to have an in-depth one-to-one discussion.  The fee for a morning or afternoon session is £200.

ALL TYPESCRIPTS MUST BE PROVIDED IN HARD COPY AND DOUBLE SPACING.  Please include:

• cheque with your typescript
• a stamped addressed envelope, if you want me to return your manuscript.